You want the truth? That's freakin' awesome and you need to stop being so hard on yourself.

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-Lying to myself about the tears on my face, the blood dripping to the floor, and the dreams I've shattered with my sin-

Aw Wow! thisis amazing! this foarm of art always (and neverfails) Reminds me of Tim Burten or Joughnan Vasquez- awsome peace, I am loveing the gloomyness to this, well thats atleast what I see- this is amazing!-Midori

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"Ich wundere mich wie weit es ist zu sonne wenn du ihr entgegen rennst"

It's so cool! I really like it! The hair, the tree... the colors... perfect! Wow! Please make more pics with this style!

*+fav*

I don't think you should change a thing. Her expression is perfect and her eyes looks so empty and lost. The only thing that looks a little strange is the grass. It kinda looks like the wind is blowing it in a different direction than her hair.

the detail is outstanding

she's a very spooky figure. she fits perfectly into the background you've created for her

even her hair has an eerie flow about it

the red in the leaves balances the firey colour of her hair.
awesome composition.

the whole piece is gorgeous dude

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You already know my two cents on this piece, so I simply say.. "HIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!"

the atmosphere is perfect... it's just that the grass is blowing the wrong way.

very spooky. I feel all creeped out now. I think it accomplished what you needed. And its intriguing it makes me want to know whats going on.

Shoot I wish I could see the whole thing in one frame -_-

I would say consider some darker areas, right now the background seems to be lacking in contrast . . however this could be because I can't see the bottom and top of the picture as one unit. The grass up front seems to have a better range of contrast.

Perhaps also expirement (on something else!) with how dry brush might make the tree look. It might add some interesting texture into this picture, which otherwise has some fairly even texture to it.

Also, if you ahve a computer program, you could scan this in and see if placing any of the redish color toward the center might help move the eye around. Right now, the red seems concentrated all toward the middle (well stretching across the middle, but still it feels confined) Again, though, that could just be a symptom as my inability to see the picture all at one and not an actual composition problem.

Other that, I realy can't think of anything, even those are more suggestions to try. I'm not sure if they'd make it any better. Just whatever you do, don't give that girl pupils. She looks awesome without them. Heck don't touch her at all. You've got a lot of great, clean brush work on her and she looks just fine. I love the darker area under her eyes. It's a great touch!

I love this picture, it's great style, and as well as idea. What's this girls doing? Windblowing everything around ?
Nice defined hair!

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